YCN OASIS: PERSONAL CRIT

After some consideration I still wasn't sure after the final crit about my designs. I decided to arrange a crit with a friend of mine who is Graphic Design graduate and has entered and won YCN briefs before for some advice.

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Try use type like this so reflects there site at the time you enter the competition:

I like how its clean and typography based

Try and align the bottom statements with width of the big text for visual balance.

Love the Didot font, stick with that because its a very fashion based font and re-reading brief you got it spot on.

After this mini crit I felt much better about my concept and decided to continue with developing my designs and mock ups for the competition.