I showed them both the designs and took notes on the comments they had made about them.
- I really like this design and the way you have manipulated the images.
- This design works well, but looks more like a poster than a movie poster.
- I think you should try changing the design from portrait to landscape.
- You should add more text about who is guest staring in the film.
- I don't understand what the image represents or is about.
- I think this design is a more suitable design for the Alternative Movie posters submission.
- I like the colour choice and it really stands out.
- You should develop the design more to make it look like a wheel.
From this mini crit, I felt that I had received some constructive criticism on how I could develop my work further. From the comments I think I am going to develop my second design more as it was more suited to the Alternative Movie posters website and their aesthetic. However I will still submit both designs and see which one they prefer.
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